Against my will, I am writing a short story. Do not get me wrong, I love, love, LOVE reading. Reading someone else's imagination is a lot easier than writing my own creative thinking. I am sure being an author will be a struggle.
As horrible as writing may sound, creating the characters is pretty fun. Going on Hero Machine and getting to form my characters helped me to visualize the actual appearance. There were so many options to choose from and those choices assisted me in compsing my short story.
Beforehand, I have written that fiction is not exactly my cup of tea. I am not joking. Fashioning this story into existence might be one of the hardest things I have ever done. I can produce some of the most amazing creations on canvas, but put a pencil in my hand and say "Write..," I am doomed for weeks of brain farts.
As I was shaping the main person in my story, I knew that she had to be different. As a result, I gave her red flaming hair and fiery blue eyes. She needed to be tough and stubborn on the inside and outside, so she holds a gun with a roll of ammunition crossing her torso. Her pants are torn giving her an "I can go through anything" look. My character's stance is proud and and firm showing she know what she is doing and why.
This story will not be easy. I am sure some will just breeze right through this project with ease and confidence, but me, ha, I am just gonna roll with the punches. Wish me luck!
Wednesday, April 10, 2013
Wednesday, March 13, 2013
BR 2: Down Where My Love Lives
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Conversation with a Character
Clarissa: "Hi Maggie. How are you today?"
Maggie: "Just fine. I'm a little tired of doing interviews."
Clarissa: "I'm not surprised. You're famous now that your 'alive' again. How long were you in that coma?"
Maggie: "Four months. Dylan said those months felt like years."
Clarissa: "Dylan is your husband, correct?"
Maggie: "Yes, Dylan is my husband, and a good one too. I don't know how he waited that long for me."
Clarissa: "It must have been true love. You two are meant for each other, and now that you have went through this, I'm sure you can go through anything."
Maggie: "This really has been a rough ride for both of us. Losing that first child was awful, but.....losing the twins was a nightmare."
Clarissa: "Wow, it sounds terrible. I don't know how you've stayed so strong."
Maggie: "Dylan has been my rock. Our friends, Amos and Amanda, have really helped us though this time also."
Clarissa: "Is there still a chance that you can have children, or is that goal nearly impossible?"
Maggie: "Yes, there is still a good chance that we can have a family, but every time we try, the attempt usually fails. That is why we're looking into adoption."
Clarissa: "And how is that process coming?"
Maggie: "Unfortunately, I don't think that the adoption agency will let us adopt. They view me as 'emotionally unstable.' Another bad factor that the agency got a good look at is our house. A gang had recently burned it down, so of course they will probably assume that our environment is always unsafe."
Clarissa: "Again, I am amazed at how you have stayed sane. I'm sure I would go crazy. I would love to talk to you more, but I'm afraid this is all I have time for. Thanks for coming."
Maggie: "Thank you for inviting me."
A Different Ending
Clarissa: "Personally, I love your story, but I think it needs a new ending."
Maggie: "Oh, and how would you change the end?"
Clarissa: "Well, first of all, I would make you actually have a kid before the book ends."
Maggie: "I like that idea, but how?"
Clarissa: "Instead of both the twins dying, I would have at least one of them survive. Losing both children is just too sad. You need a little happiness in your life."
Maggie: "But the book ends leaving you thinking that I will eventually have children."
Clarissa: "Then I would make an epilogue a few years later displaying the scene of a happy family with your front yard scattered with toys. A little girl with your Audrey Hepburn hair and Bettie Davis eyes would be sitting in Dylan's lap, while you and the smaller replica of your husband would be running through the corn fields in front of your house."
Maggie: *sigh* "That's my every day dream. I just wish that would happen. I know Dylan wants kids and it breaks my heart that I can't give him what he wants."
Clarissa: "Well, he has you. One day, I believe you will have children and make Dylan the happiest Dad alive."
Maggie: "I sure hope so. I love your ending, I only wish that it was real."
Clarissa: "Someday, it will be. God has a plan."
Maggie: "God was Dylan's rock throughout the coma. I can only hope that He will get us through the years to come."
Clarissa: "He will. Well, time's up today. Thank you for sharing your story."
Maggie: "No, thank you for sharing yours."
THE END
Sunday, February 24, 2013
Current Connection: Feb 25
When you go to big cities, there are always homeless people lined up on the streets jingling their cups for spare change to make it through the week. On the CNN website, in Dana Ford's article, Donations pour in for homeless man who returned diamond ring she explains a story of true character that we do not often see in the world.
As we all know, homeless people do not have much money. When the opportunity of "quick cash" arises, they usually take that opportunity. However, Billy Ray Harris did not. Ford explains, "Well-wishers from around the world are opening their wallets to a homeless man who returned a diamond engagement ring to its rightful owner, after she accidentally dropped it in his donation cup." If I had lost my engagement ring, I would be, literally, freaking out. Even without my class ring I feel naked.
As we all know, homeless people do not have much money. When the opportunity of "quick cash" arises, they usually take that opportunity. However, Billy Ray Harris did not. Ford explains, "Well-wishers from around the world are opening their wallets to a homeless man who returned a diamond engagement ring to its rightful owner, after she accidentally dropped it in his donation cup." If I had lost my engagement ring, I would be, literally, freaking out. Even without my class ring I feel naked.
Now, I'm thinking how on Earth did this woman lose her ENGAGEMENT RING? She had better have a pretty good reason, and she did. Ford states, "She almost never takes it off, but it was giving her a bit of a rash so she did, zipping it in her coin purse for safe keeping....Later, she absentmindedly
emptied the contents of that purse into the collection cup of Billy Ray
Harris, who is homeless and often stays under a bridge in Darling's
hometown. It wasn't until the next day that she realized her ring was gone." People would probably think that Harris would run off with the ring, cash it in, and be set to live comfortably for a while. Despite his title and everyone's assumptions, Harris did not run away with the ring but instead he gave the ring back when Sarah Darling came inquiring for her lost treasure the next day.
To show them their thanks, Darling and her fiance helped Harris out a little. In her article, Ford says, "To show their appreciation, Darling and her husband set up an online
fundraiser for Harris. The donations and praise have poured in....So far, in about a week, more than 3,400 donations have been made,
totaling nearly $95,000. The money will be given to Harris at the end of
a 90-day campaign." That is one lucky man!!! Looks like having good character pays off in the end!
If I were homeless, I would have ran away with that thing as fast as possible. However, I am glad that there are still people like Billy Ray Harris in the world.
There is a saying that says "what goes around comes around" so I guess Billy deserved what came around for what he did. Hopefully, there are a lot more people like him.
Friday, February 15, 2013
The Piano
In certain movies, there is a piano. Someone usually plays that piano in the movie and when they do, the piano sings and the player's fingers glide across the keys. I have been playing the piano for about four years now and sometimes learning the art is a challenge. Although, practicing music calms me in a way that nothing else can. The music that comes from the instrument seems to have a life of its own. I enjoy being the one who makes it live.
I am not going to lie; playing the piano is a ton of work. I practice for 30 minutes a day, and I have most definitely not acquired the skills that I want to have. In the beginning playing was easy, but as I progressed, the music became a new language. The notes were either dangerously low or high above the staff, the treble and bass clefs. Becoming the pianist I want to be will not be an easy task. I have so much further to go in my lessons and I am sure playing will only become even more trying.
I have played many pieces of music in my four years (going on five). I started out with different books containing very simplified versions of real pieces, scales, and chords. Now I am a lot more advanced than I used to be. Practice makes perfect! Although I am far from perfect, the pieces I play now are at least 4 to 5 pages long. The works I am currently practicing are Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata and Mozart's Turkish March. The first is 5 pages and the second is 6 pages long. Moonlight Sonata is a very slow song, and the Turkish March is super duper fast. I'm having a lot of fun with both.
If you have seen a piano before, you know that there are white keys and black keys. The white keys are the "natural" keys, whereas the black keys are either "sharps" or "flats." I know this probably sounds confusing, but the specifics become second nature once you get the main stuff down. The notes have a specific name. The white keys are named a, b, c, d, e, f, g and then the naming system starts all over again. As you go up the keyboard, the black keys are A sharp or #, B#, C#, D#, E#, F#, and G#. As you move down the piano, the black keys become "flat," and the names of them are A flat, B flat, C flat, D flat, F flat, and G flat. Learning the notes becomes simpler over time.
Music is like a river; it speeds up, but then at a moments notice, slows down. Pieces can have very soft music (pp), just soft enough to be quieter (p), having a normal loudness (mf), or being louder than usual (f). Music also has crescendo's, which means the music builds volume over a series of notes. There are staccato's that makes the note abrupt and short. The symbol of a staccato is usually a dot over a note. There are lots of other things I cannot think off the top of my head, but in short, piano music is usually very complicated.
A word of advice: DO NOT start piano lessons if the heart is not fully into the music. Playing, as I said before, is very hard work and takes a lot of patience. Contradictory to what I just said, the piano is also so much fun and when you learn how to play a song, the feeling is indescribable. The piano is an overall enjoyable instrument, and I recommend that if you want to learn, go for it!
I am not going to lie; playing the piano is a ton of work. I practice for 30 minutes a day, and I have most definitely not acquired the skills that I want to have. In the beginning playing was easy, but as I progressed, the music became a new language. The notes were either dangerously low or high above the staff, the treble and bass clefs. Becoming the pianist I want to be will not be an easy task. I have so much further to go in my lessons and I am sure playing will only become even more trying.
I have played many pieces of music in my four years (going on five). I started out with different books containing very simplified versions of real pieces, scales, and chords. Now I am a lot more advanced than I used to be. Practice makes perfect! Although I am far from perfect, the pieces I play now are at least 4 to 5 pages long. The works I am currently practicing are Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata and Mozart's Turkish March. The first is 5 pages and the second is 6 pages long. Moonlight Sonata is a very slow song, and the Turkish March is super duper fast. I'm having a lot of fun with both.
If you have seen a piano before, you know that there are white keys and black keys. The white keys are the "natural" keys, whereas the black keys are either "sharps" or "flats." I know this probably sounds confusing, but the specifics become second nature once you get the main stuff down. The notes have a specific name. The white keys are named a, b, c, d, e, f, g and then the naming system starts all over again. As you go up the keyboard, the black keys are A sharp or #, B#, C#, D#, E#, F#, and G#. As you move down the piano, the black keys become "flat," and the names of them are A flat, B flat, C flat, D flat, F flat, and G flat. Learning the notes becomes simpler over time.
Music is like a river; it speeds up, but then at a moments notice, slows down. Pieces can have very soft music (pp), just soft enough to be quieter (p), having a normal loudness (mf), or being louder than usual (f). Music also has crescendo's, which means the music builds volume over a series of notes. There are staccato's that makes the note abrupt and short. The symbol of a staccato is usually a dot over a note. There are lots of other things I cannot think off the top of my head, but in short, piano music is usually very complicated.
A word of advice: DO NOT start piano lessons if the heart is not fully into the music. Playing, as I said before, is very hard work and takes a lot of patience. Contradictory to what I just said, the piano is also so much fun and when you learn how to play a song, the feeling is indescribable. The piano is an overall enjoyable instrument, and I recommend that if you want to learn, go for it!
Monday, February 11, 2013
CC#3: Feb. 11
Imagine being on a cruise and getting away from all the struggles of life and just relaxing.Suddenly, the captain's voice comes over the speakers, "Folks, the engine just caught fire and we are going to be stuck for a while. Sorry for the inconvenience." CNN staff reports this story in the recent article Carnival cruise ship to be towed after fire strands it in Gulf of Mexico and explain the situation that the cruise ship was in.
The passengers were obviously in a pickle, and did not expect their vacation to become a "trip gone bad." The news reporters state in the article, "The Carnival Triumph was about 150 miles off the coast of Mexico's Yucatan Peninsula, heading back to Galveston, Texas, when the fire broke out in an engine room Sunday morning, according to Carnival Cruise Lines. The ship's automatic fire extinguishing system kicked in and soon contained the blaze, and no injuries were reported, Carnival said Monday." Thankfully, nobody was hurt down in the engine room and the crew got to the fire and controlled the accident before anyone was seriously injured. The ship was still in deep water and only going about two miles an hour, so the ship was out of trouble.
Brent Nutt spoke with his wife who was on the ship and says, "She said they had no power, no running water, and she said she hadn't been able to eat anything yet." That problem was soon solved and "guests have been supplied with food and refreshments throughout yesterday and this morning and the ship has supplies on board to last until the vessel returns to port," states Carnival. The electricity was soon turned back on with emergency generators, and people were actually able to use the toilets again! Man, that would be awful to be without a toilet.
All of this trouble kind of has benefits. The cruise line said, "After being towed to Progreso, those aboard the Carnival Triumph will be flown back to the United States at no cost to them, the cruise line said. They will also get a full refund, credit that can be used toward a future trip and reimbursement for all expenses, except casino and gift shop purchases." Even though, the trip was not all that great, maybe the discounted one will go a lot smoother! If the passengers would have had to pay, I am sure there would have been many unhappy people.
I do not know why, but this incident kind of reminds me of the Titanic. None of the Carnival passengers died, but them being stranded out in the ocean makes me remember the tragedy of the Titanic. I have never been on a cruise, but I do not intend to get on one after all these stories!
In conclusion, many passengers on this cruise had their vacation ruined, but everything worked out in the end.
The passengers were obviously in a pickle, and did not expect their vacation to become a "trip gone bad." The news reporters state in the article, "The Carnival Triumph was about 150 miles off the coast of Mexico's Yucatan Peninsula, heading back to Galveston, Texas, when the fire broke out in an engine room Sunday morning, according to Carnival Cruise Lines. The ship's automatic fire extinguishing system kicked in and soon contained the blaze, and no injuries were reported, Carnival said Monday." Thankfully, nobody was hurt down in the engine room and the crew got to the fire and controlled the accident before anyone was seriously injured. The ship was still in deep water and only going about two miles an hour, so the ship was out of trouble.
Brent Nutt spoke with his wife who was on the ship and says, "She said they had no power, no running water, and she said she hadn't been able to eat anything yet." That problem was soon solved and "guests have been supplied with food and refreshments throughout yesterday and this morning and the ship has supplies on board to last until the vessel returns to port," states Carnival. The electricity was soon turned back on with emergency generators, and people were actually able to use the toilets again! Man, that would be awful to be without a toilet.
All of this trouble kind of has benefits. The cruise line said, "After being towed to Progreso, those aboard the Carnival Triumph will be flown back to the United States at no cost to them, the cruise line said. They will also get a full refund, credit that can be used toward a future trip and reimbursement for all expenses, except casino and gift shop purchases." Even though, the trip was not all that great, maybe the discounted one will go a lot smoother! If the passengers would have had to pay, I am sure there would have been many unhappy people.
I do not know why, but this incident kind of reminds me of the Titanic. None of the Carnival passengers died, but them being stranded out in the ocean makes me remember the tragedy of the Titanic. I have never been on a cruise, but I do not intend to get on one after all these stories!
In conclusion, many passengers on this cruise had their vacation ruined, but everything worked out in the end.
Thursday, January 31, 2013
Book Review #1: Feb. 1
Imagine a world where wizards and witches exist. Flying brooms, spells, and all types of magic are just a normal part of life. J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter series sucks you into a realm where all this and more is possible.
One theme of this series is pretty much Good vs. Evil. Voldemort, the mortal enemy of just about every wizard (except for his followers, the Death Eaters), plans to take over the world killing the main character, Harry Potter, in the process. Harry Potter has to war with the evil inside of him and kill Voldemort before Voldemort kills him: both cannot survive at the same time. With the help of his friends including Professor Dumbledore, Hermione, Ron, Neville, and many others, Harry strives to save the world from utter destruction.
There are so many characters in this book, it is almost confusing. So, I will just describe the main characters. Harry Potter, the star of the books, is an orphan boy trying to "fit in" in the "muggle" (human) world. He's just different, and then he finds out that he is a wizard! How crazy would that be? So he goes and trains at a school called Hogwarts and has amazing and frightening experiences there. He also meets Hermione and Ron, his two best friends in the series. Hermione is a goody two-shoes who is always the best at every class. Ron is Harry's awkward and clumsy friend who always messes up everything. Professor Dumbledore helps Harry along his journey to defeat Voldemort and wizard and muggle lives.
The story mostly takes place at Hogwarts, a training school for young wizards and witches. The school is protected by a shield that mostly keeps dark magic out. It is where Harry meets all his friends and his enemies, like the kids from Slytherin.
I was kind of skeptical of these books at first because I am not really into the whole "wizard" stuff, but once I started reading them, I could not stop. The movies are good, but they are NOTHING compared to the books. So, READ THE BOOKS! THEY ARE AMAZING!
One theme of this series is pretty much Good vs. Evil. Voldemort, the mortal enemy of just about every wizard (except for his followers, the Death Eaters), plans to take over the world killing the main character, Harry Potter, in the process. Harry Potter has to war with the evil inside of him and kill Voldemort before Voldemort kills him: both cannot survive at the same time. With the help of his friends including Professor Dumbledore, Hermione, Ron, Neville, and many others, Harry strives to save the world from utter destruction.
There are so many characters in this book, it is almost confusing. So, I will just describe the main characters. Harry Potter, the star of the books, is an orphan boy trying to "fit in" in the "muggle" (human) world. He's just different, and then he finds out that he is a wizard! How crazy would that be? So he goes and trains at a school called Hogwarts and has amazing and frightening experiences there. He also meets Hermione and Ron, his two best friends in the series. Hermione is a goody two-shoes who is always the best at every class. Ron is Harry's awkward and clumsy friend who always messes up everything. Professor Dumbledore helps Harry along his journey to defeat Voldemort and wizard and muggle lives.
The story mostly takes place at Hogwarts, a training school for young wizards and witches. The school is protected by a shield that mostly keeps dark magic out. It is where Harry meets all his friends and his enemies, like the kids from Slytherin.
I was kind of skeptical of these books at first because I am not really into the whole "wizard" stuff, but once I started reading them, I could not stop. The movies are good, but they are NOTHING compared to the books. So, READ THE BOOKS! THEY ARE AMAZING!
Sunday, January 27, 2013
Current Connections #2
In a recent article on CNN Hundreds killed in Brazil nightclub fire, reporters Shasta Darlington, Marilia Brocchetto, and Helena DeMoura record the tragic story of a southern Brazilian nightclub catching fire early on Sunday.
The ladies state, "The blaze at the Kiss nightclub in Santa Maria killed at least 232 people, many of whom apparently died from smoke inhalation, state-run Agencia Brasil reported, citing fire officials. Others were trampled in the rush for the exits, one security guard told CNN affiliate Band News. More than 130 people were hospitalized, Agencia Brasil said." The fire started because the acoustic insulation caught on fire. No one knows how the fire started: the police are still investigating the cause.
According to the text, "About 2,000 people were inside the club when the fire broke out -- double the maximum capacity of 1,000, said Guido de Melo, a state fire official." Maybe if the club had only had 1,000 people in it, more lives could have been saved. There were not enough exits for everyone to get out.
Many families called their loved ones when they found out the fire had taken place; some did not answer. In the story, the reporters say, "Desperate families and friends wept as they searched for information outside a local gymnasium where bodies were taken for identification later Sunday. Inside, Brazilian President Dilma Rousseff met with some of them as they waited on bleachers for word of their loved ones." The president had recently been on a trip, but cut the vacation short when she received the news. That was good of her to be there for her people in their hour of need.
This sort of reminds me of 9/11. there was not nearly as many deaths, but many people died by the blaze, smoke inhalation, or the roof collapsing; the same causes of death as 9/11.
We can only pray for those who have lost loved ones, or those who are still in critical condition.
The ladies state, "The blaze at the Kiss nightclub in Santa Maria killed at least 232 people, many of whom apparently died from smoke inhalation, state-run Agencia Brasil reported, citing fire officials. Others were trampled in the rush for the exits, one security guard told CNN affiliate Band News. More than 130 people were hospitalized, Agencia Brasil said." The fire started because the acoustic insulation caught on fire. No one knows how the fire started: the police are still investigating the cause.
According to the text, "About 2,000 people were inside the club when the fire broke out -- double the maximum capacity of 1,000, said Guido de Melo, a state fire official." Maybe if the club had only had 1,000 people in it, more lives could have been saved. There were not enough exits for everyone to get out.
Many families called their loved ones when they found out the fire had taken place; some did not answer. In the story, the reporters say, "Desperate families and friends wept as they searched for information outside a local gymnasium where bodies were taken for identification later Sunday. Inside, Brazilian President Dilma Rousseff met with some of them as they waited on bleachers for word of their loved ones." The president had recently been on a trip, but cut the vacation short when she received the news. That was good of her to be there for her people in their hour of need.
This sort of reminds me of 9/11. there was not nearly as many deaths, but many people died by the blaze, smoke inhalation, or the roof collapsing; the same causes of death as 9/11.
We can only pray for those who have lost loved ones, or those who are still in critical condition.
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